Tol-Timpinen

There's a tempest in yon horned moon,
And lightning in yon cloud,
And hard the music, mariners,
The wind is piping loud;
The wind is piping loud, my boys!
The lightning flashes free,
While the hollow oak our palace is,
Our heritage the sea.

Sunday, May 09, 2004

Viserys [Working Title] Outline

1. Daydreams
 ¤ intro. VISERYS STARK
 ¤ history class (teacher: Teff Coaltin)
 ¤ Battle of Trafalgar flashback
   × scratch on arm
   × sees Nelson get shot
2. Sunny Days and Sudden Dangers
 ¤ Demora City; extremely hot
 ¤ intro. ALEX YATTER
 ¤ Battle of Tafalgar flashback II
   × cannonball in stomach
3. To Know
 ¤ history of VISERYS and ALEX
 ¤ intro. SANCHURA ZANN (ALEX's brother)
 ¤ current state of VISERYS
   × hospitalized
   × unconscious for one week
 ¤ ALEX had visions six years previously; now having dreams again
4. [Untitled]
 ¤ intro. ANA and JONATHEN STARK (VISERYS' parents)
 ¤ looking at old family pictures, memories
   × GENNA, AYAMI, and TAMAETHA (TAM) dressed up to go to a dance
   × three GIRLS and VISERYS running through park
   × STARK FAMILY on vacation in California
   × VISERYS with friends, cosplaying for Halloween
 ¤ explain that VISERYS was semi-punk gamer, worked at school but didn't make extraordinary efforts, very popular and nice, close to sisters; after Accident, became introvert and threw himself into school
  ¤ phone call from hospital with "bad news"
5. [Untitled]
  ¤ ALEX and STARKS at hospital
  ¤ DOCTOR says VISERYS unstable; if conditions deteriorate any further, death is likely
  ¤ STARKS go into room, ALEX waits outside
  ¤ ALEX goes in when STARKS leave
   × VISERYS siezes, heart stops, DOCTOR pronounces dead
   × ALEX shoves DOCTORS aside and grabs VISERYS' hand, shouting
   × VISERYS opens eyes
   × code in next room over, patient dies
  ¤ ALEX and VISERYS alone, VISERYS says will explain what happened later, STARKS come in